The impact you have on this work is quite unique. I have already had occasion to see similar design styles, and are always very interesting. Your design here is admirable and the figures of various animals are well located, giving evidence of a good taste in order to give figures seemingly chaotic, almost Picasso-style.
The design looks so put a little incomplete, in fact, seems to be missing the distinction between animals and some others, and this limits a little vision. The stretch a little big I think is done intentionally, and so even if a bit penalizes the technique, does not detract from the beauty of the work.Maybe a little too accentuated the size difference between the figures in the foreground and the upper ones, which inevitably pass into the background, but, usually, in these styles of art should all be homogeneous, partly because there are related in their size between them (unless you desire that a specific figure overhang the other, but in this case the distinction should be more clear, maybe with the subject at the center and the other in a circle, or to a side, and in certain cases also the title is adapted accordingly).However, we must say that your intuition has been very good;'ve played with animals so different from each other and have them harmonized well in the context. The work, in my opinion, is good.In your gallery I noticed that this is, roughly, your overall style, so there is nothing to say about it. It all depends on what your goal: if you want to improve your ability to detail, then I suggest you begin with a sudden a little lighter and play better with the effects of light / shadow. If this is your style and you want to keep it (style that I think is very interesting anyway) I can tell you that you can always work on proportions and themes, so as to give a touch of class to your work, which to me is still loved .Brava, you have a good talent. Continues to show us, will always be welcome. Good job.
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I`m not sure how to feel about this critique; as helpful as it was...the rating was not that good.
Three stars was my rating for this.
It makes me feel like I need to be more original. The comment he made about my work being "roughly" like this was interesting. For one; I never thought about the style that I did. I just drew out whatever came to me! It seems like...I need to get even more out of that bubble. Now keep in mind; I understand not everyone will like what I do.
I shall see where this will take me.
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